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Dear Reader, I’ve managed to organize my thoughts onto paper in a more (yet still loosely) structured manner. I’ve added informative sections to give my writing credibility and more reflection in my topic. Grammar and making sure my piece flows will be my next task, until then, enjoy my third draft 🙂 Narrative Essay English 4 Haleigh Fitzsimmons From the moment we are born companionship becomes an important aspect of life. We depend on social interaction our whole lives, and…

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Dear Reader, Not much has changed in this draft because I am working to comprehend where I want to go with this topic. I am trying to add an informative side to my writing, also. This essay needs a lot of work which I will be tackling soon, and very soon. Please note I will most likely cut areas of this piece to focus more on the main idea ahead of me. The writing is obviously fairly choppy and I…

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Dear Reader, First let me explain how much work this piece of work still needs. I am in no way near completion and need serious revisions. I plan to re-work my sentence structure and add more depth to my writing. My essay is based entirely on the buddy systems we have in our lives with personal experiences of a pre-school crush to a new found friendship. I hope you enjoy most of this writing, if not now later when I…

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